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The use of words like "you" or "I" in some of these pages is hampering on the encyclopedic aspect of this wikia. Let's remeber that this is not a strategy guide and not a place for words like "noob". Keep in mind that people will reference this wikia for information on the fictional universe of Gears of War, whether it be the story and background, gameplay, or weapons list. As much as we need to add, we also need to improve, polish, and refine.and carmine should not die for ones. kto7157--18.104.22.168 14:20, 17 February 2009 (UTC)
- Exactly, though I'm a bit confused at the "Carmine should not die for ones" thing at the end of your post (Vandal?). Other than that, I agree.
- The "Behind the Scenes" and "Gears of War (Windows)" sections do not sound encyclopedic at all. Some parts seem more like opinions than anything else, and criticisms of the game should have their own section. I'm reluctant to start rearranging things, but, really, the "Behind the Scenes" section should be scrapped. Also, the bullet format doesn't work, since it makes it more like a list of random thoughts on the game than anything else, it would be more aptly titled "Trivia." I might work on it a bit, maybe later. --Mito lou 22:14, 12 August 2009 (UTC)
- You have the head bureaucrat blessing.--Jack Black 22:19, 12 August 2009 (UTC)